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The Radio

Moon

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Year 6 students wrote simile poems.

The Radio

 

The Radio tastes like blue styrofoam just set alight,

The Radio smells like running gas filling a small room,

The Radio is as stiff as a frozen woolly mammoth, with all it’s pale blue skin,

The Radio looks like a genetically mutated pencil eraser,

The Radio sounds like an unruly horse, kicking down stables.

by Stipe

THE WORLD

 

The world tastes like a chocolate cake that just won’t last.

The world looks like an everlasting gobstopper covered with colourful colours.

The world smells like the seawater breeze in the mist in the evening.

The world sounds like a computer loading up a game.

 

By Kirsty P.

MOON

The moon smells like a cold freezer on a cold day .

It lights up the sky like a light bulb.

When you look at the moon it looks like blown bubbles and popping popcorn.

The moon tastes like chocolate ice cream on a hot day.

The moon sounds like a bell ringing in the middle of the day .

 By Kirsty L.

Polar Bears - A Simile Poem

Polar Bears' fur is like icicles snap frozen at the dawn of day.

Polar Bears taste like freezing cold cheese getting chewed up between your teeth.

Their feet are like a big volcano just about to erupt.

Their eyes are pitch black like the night sky.

 By Belinda P.